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Hello everyone, this is my first poem, so there would be many flaws and I am here to correct my flaws and learn from it. This poem I just wrote about how we lose an opportunity and many never get them back. so we have to act at the moment.

Shooting Star

Pz-avatarby lifetime flies04 Feb 2019

She was standing there,
gazing at the darkness of night sky.
When she noticed a shooting star
descending across the sky.
She had so many things she wanted to wish for,
so many things that she wished to make better
But at that point of the moment,
she couldn't choose one
and the time flew away
and she lost her chance